Can you grant me one last wish? Play russian roulette as we kiss...

Damn I've been practically dead to buzznet!
I haven't talked to any of my friends on here for like what... eight months?!
I guess I let all the drama that comes with real friends get to me.

Anyways I wrote this a while back, any opinions?

Darkness falls in one swift move.
Sadness takes it toll in less then a second.
Loneliness covers me with a thick blanket.
I see my life reel by
and there is nothing much to do but watch.
The sun that sets seems to be
the start to my troubled mind.
When the moon rises the tears seep through my green eyes.
Love is gone, hope is buried.
Life is short, and even if long lived we all meet the same fate.
In the end were all the same.
Pathetic humans wrapped in the hands of death.
What is the point then to all this suffering I commit myself to?
Why not take a pill or five, a gun or knife and end this little charade?

Because I love you dear

You whisper in my ear.

And I love you to

I mutter back.